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rain
Contributed by
hot_topic
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Sunday, 13th October 2002 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
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With the shadow of the moon,
That i can barely see
And the clouds rushing together so mean.
The mudd, like quicksand ,
The rain like tears.
And the feeling so deep;
of the horrors that rush to my feet,
With the puddles of mudd that flow down the street.
As i stand here soaked with rain,
I feel like im the only one
Who feels the pain.
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Re: rain
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by InexactExactness on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 07:57:19 AM AEST
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I can honestly say that I know exactly how you feel. I don't thnk i could've put it quite like you do or would of been able to write a poem in the middle of the street while it was raining. But you did and it's actually a really good poem to be written at such a random time. Keep up the good work and know that yur not alone in the way you feel.
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