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Treasure Lost
Contributed by
thumper
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:56:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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LOOK! What a beautiful yard!
MY! What a pleasure to see!
Green as an emerald
Neat as a pin
Lovely as a yard can be!
Oh, what a chore it must be
To keep it so pretty and right
Think of the slugs
The deer and the bugs
The moles that come out in the night
How dare they invade this Eden you made!
How dare they tread on your turf!
You'll spray by day and trap by night
To protect your small piece of this earth
It's precious, you see. Every blade, leaf, and tree
I hear what you're saying, my friend,
Because before you moved in
It was our home and then......
Here we are on the outside, looking in!
(just a little note: I wrote this years ago. One of my first)
Copyright ©
thumper
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2004-06-03 21:56:46]
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Re: Treasure Lost
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by venkat on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:46:30 AM AEST
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| Awww..wonderful description..very delightful lovely poem...:-) venkat |
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Re: Treasure Lost
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by moon_light on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:41:13 AM AEST
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so true it was thare home. you've coult the thoghts of our fellow creachers after we treet them with disrespect. thank you
your dear freind jen:) |
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Re: Treasure Lost
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by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:57:49 AM AEST
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| Bittersweet. I think you've captured the view point very well. And I must say, you've been a pretty good poet from the beginning, then. |
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Re: Treasure Lost
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by bernard on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:37:14 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem Thumper this is a very positive wrting with which I fully emote. Thank you for a delightful read. 5/5.
Hugs from
Bernard. |
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Re: Treasure Lost
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:02:23 PM AEST
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awww! precious! your note just complately captured me, poor lill critters:) around here they come in anyway, i dont know why i bother with fences, lol, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Treasure Lost
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:03:24 PM AEST
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| that would be 'completely' *blush* |
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