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Time
Contributed by
thumper
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:41:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It races on with wing-ed feet
I can't catch up for I've slowed down
I try and try with all my might
I wish now I weren't grown
It passes by in just a flash
It went so quick, I say
If it would slow, then I'd catch up
For that thought I would pay
The end is near, it is in sight
There'll be no dawn after this long night
It's creeping, crawling slowly again
It is the end. This is not right.
It tricked me as I wished for life
It tricked me when I had it
By the time we get what we want
It's gone in a flash dad-nab-it!
This is more in the line of goofy poetry but I didn't see that catagory.lol
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Re: Time
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by bttrflynajar on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:47:28 PM AEST
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lol...good one...describes the truth of time while keeping it some what light hearted!
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Re: Time
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by venkat on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:37:57 AM AEST
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"It's creeping, crawling slowly again It is the end. This is not right"..good description about time..
"It passes by in just a flash
It went so quick, I say
If it would slow, then I'd catch up
For that thought I would pay"
..actually these lines brought smiles to me..
Very good poem..thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. venkat
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Re: Time
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:12:29 AM AEST
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I found your poem very entertaining.......and true........Life just gets up and flies, and where are you?
I especially liked the line you said was goofy!
I found it great dad--nab it!
Wonderful
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Re: Time
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:12:16 AM AEST
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I Also Found Your Poem Entertaining & Very Interesting To Read Thanks For Sharing :-)
Keep Em Coming !!!
Love,Hugs & God Bless
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: Time
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:54:30 AM AEST
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Good write...
"..la la la life is a strange thing
just when you think you've learned how to use it
it's gone..."
From Hello (Turn Your Radio On) by Shakespeare's Sister
Hugs,
Hur
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Re: Time
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by moon_light on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 05:51:15 PM AEST
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| good one time dose go by too fast |
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Re: Time
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:53:06 AM AEST
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Time is like quicksand, one vanishes so quickly if one should step into it. A good description of time looked at in a different light. great.
bernard. |
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Re: Time
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:37:16 AM AEST
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| Well, for me time hasn't been going fast enough lately but yeah, everyone knows that -where'd-the-time-go feeling. You've expressed that very well here. |
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Re: Time
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 01:03:18 AM AEST
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cute:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Time
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:44:22 AM AEST
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You got me
"Clever got me this far
& tricking Got me in
I am what I'm after
I don't need another friend
I'll get what I came for
Then I'm out the door again." -Manyard-
Good poem
gets me thinking
So I think time heals
Reguardless if you understand or believe me
"I Need what I came for
I need just what is mine
I need what I crave
I need to smile to get what I need" -manyard- |
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Re: Time
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:40:34 AM AEST
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Yes, funny and true. Well done.
Take care.
David |
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