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Awake or still dreaming?
Contributed by
jt
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:24:47 AM in AEST
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Reeling from the visions
As I wake up from this dream
Images impure
Still choking on a scream
Feeling through the darkness
As I reach up for the door
Overwhelming fear
I cannot take no more
Footsteps chilling my blood
Voices speaking clear to me
Panic overridden
I know I cannot see
Leave this world forever
Upon the nightmare express
Feel the cold dead fingers
As my body they caress
Wake up in a cold sweat
Am I here or still dreaming?
All I feel is emptiness
All I hear is my own screaming
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Re: Awake or still dreaming?
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 02:02:16 AM AEST
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Sad but written like a pro.
Hope things start to look up for u and the nitemares go away.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Awake or still dreaming?
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by carmen_queasy on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:00:35 AM AEST
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| It flows together really well. Very cool. |
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Re: Awake or still dreaming?
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by pixie on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:02:17 AM AEST
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Very well written indeed, impressed......5/5
pixie xx |
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Re: Awake or still dreaming?
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by MilitaryPrince on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:57:54 AM AEST
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| Very well written!! It covers some very deep emotional thoughts...keep up the great work! |
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