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Red river runs deep
Contributed by
Bohemian_with_a_pen
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:12:09 AM in AEST
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Falling into old habits, its hard to climb out
scream for help all u want, no one will ever hear you shout
Friends become strangers, strangers feed your hobby
Sidling down the hallway, hiding in the lobby
Satan wears an overcoat and meets you in dark alleys
Red river runs deep, used veins become valleys
I've lost everything, my own sense of self
I'm the same decaying matter as everyone else
My lifes going to quickly, hell wont wait
for ***** sake save me before its too late...
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Re: Red river runs deep
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by pixie on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:58:26 AM AEST
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I am sorry to hear of your addiction, I have never been addicted to drus, but alcohol, you can beat this..... thanks for sharing the poem, it was very insightful to the life of an addict,
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: Red river runs deep
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:10:30 AM AEST
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I hear you brother man. This is a good write.
Showing your addiction and your fight. Very deep does the river run, but where it goes it come to find you. And as you put it, the addiction can't have you unless you have it. It sounds like you don't want it. Keep that in your mind and bekieve god can give you the strength it's only a matter of time. Good luck, God bless you, & my prayers go for you in your realization that you are stronger than you remember. |
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Re: Red river runs deep
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:54:27 AM AEST
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| Echo. Sorry to hear you're having dificulties, but awsome write! This conveyed so much emotion and was written so beautifully! I have never been addicted to drugs, but your poem was so powerful that... I dunno. It was amazing. Lots of luck on kicking the habbit! |
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Re: Red river runs deep
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by little_genna on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 04:03:29 AM AEST
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wow such an insightful poem in such a short amount of words, addictions are never great no matter what they are. i hope you kick this habbit before it wrecks your life. keep writing this was just such a great write in its sadness
love and hugs
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Re: Red river runs deep
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by iluvpencils on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:33:38 PM AEST
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| What can I say? This was a great poem. Awesome. I can relate |
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Re: Red river runs deep
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by ladymaki on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:51:40 PM AEST
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| You are such a great writer! I can relate to so many poems.. |
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