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The Lost Soul
Contributed by
MilitaryPrince
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:44:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sometimes at night I lie awake
And wonder how much more my soul can take
Emotions that just cant say goodbye
Each night I still let lose and cry
With time your mind might understand
That the love of your life has found a man
But your mind and your soul are two different things
Your mind may cope, but your soul spreads wings
The mind moves on, but a soul will fly
Its for this innocent soul each night you cry
Yet on it soars from door to door
In search of a love, it will never ignore
Cause theres only one thing a soul cant learn
That the love it yearns, wont be returned
And when your love for ones so very strong
You heart will swear, your mind must be wrong!
Surely this is a dreadful mistake
Your heart it seems just will not break
It wont slow down until its crowned
Next to the one, that may never be found
So on it searches from door to door
For this love that drives, it cant ignore
And the day will come when your heart and soul
Meet together, to pay their toll
They seemed to think there would always be more
But now it seems theyve reached the last door
The sweetest key of love together they hold
But the lock of this door, is not the same mold
It doesnt matter how hard they try
This door theyve found wont ever pry
Its then that your heart will break down and weep
For this unanswered love, it must always keep
Finally it has seen what no soul can learn
That the love it gave, wont be returned
And if youre strong your heart may mend
Yet for this soul, there can be no end
So on it soars everywhere it can
For a love thats given to another man
Cause theres only one thing a soul cant learn
That the love it feels, wont be returned
Late in my life when God calls my name
Its then I must try to hide my shame
For when I stand at heavens gate
I know my soul will show up late
Cause where else could it possibly be
Than pounding on that door
Searching for the love it can never ignore
Copyright ©
MilitaryPrince
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2004-06-04 06:44:40]
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Re: The Lost Soul
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by pixie on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:54:31 AM AEST
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this is sad, but you have a real talent for expressing your feeling with ease , well thats how they come across in your poems, I am looking forwadr to reading more from you
takecare
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Re: The Lost Soul
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by gery_giggles on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:02:57 AM AEST
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wow...this was a good poem,it showed lots of emotion and a feeling so many face everyday...
luv always |
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Re: The Lost Soul
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by thumper on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:34:57 AM AEST
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Unrequited love. The subject of many a poem. :o)I think you stated it so very well. This was a nice read and had good flow to it. Welcome to YPDC, which I think you'll find is quite an addictive place to be.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: The Lost Soul
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:58:34 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem, thought it wrapped nicely.
It got a little long/repetitive I think you can make it even better if you shorten it up a bit.
Either way, great expression, wonderful sentiment. A favorite topic of mine! |
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Re: The Lost Soul
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by swiftsouljah on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:41:54 AM AEST
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searching for love it can never ignore....
everyday of my life since march 21st.... great job
wayne |
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Re: The Lost Soul
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:40:09 AM AEST
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The search.....it may continue all our lives and only be acknowledged at "that" door.::::::pointing skyward::::::: otherwise...live and learn. A beautiful expression of flowing words!
Welcome toYPDC..... :-)
Angel always....godspeed...joni |
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Re: The Lost Soul
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:44:51 PM AEST
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beautiful poem I loved how this flowed and how it was under the topic of lost love, but did not resort to anger or self-pity as many poems do. I hope to see a lot from you in the months to come.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The Lost Soul
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:47:54 AM AEST
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Breathtaking beautiful. You have such a talent for describing emotions. Excellent poem
Love Dawny x |
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Re: The Lost Soul
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:11:03 PM AEST
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Oh wow. This was an awesome poem. You portrayed everything I am feeling right at this very moment. It's a horrible feeling and each miserable pain you found a way to describe in perfect detail. Thank you for sharing this. Wow.
Lindsey |
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