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Red Dawn
Contributed by
rhei76
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:57:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Past the fire
Thru the ring
Into the mare
Where Siren sings
The skin peels back
The drums now bleed
Bone all shatter
When they feed
I wake in sweat, but the sweat ain't mine. Hell, this isn't sweat. What is this? Ahhh ah (a light turns on) OH S***! It's blood! Blood? Who's blood? I'm not bleeding. What the....
Further into the scape we slide. Wondering what happend to our mind. Seemingly we sleep all the time. So why is it bloody when i find myself waking up?
(turns to black)
Past the fire
Thru the ring
Into the mare
Where Siren sings
With flesh no skin
Picking teeth with bones that splinter
Some demigod,devil, like angel
Sipping on marrow
Snapping the necks
Sucking the brains
Every last spec
Till the bones are dry
of every last respect
I wake up
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Re: Red Dawn
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by Luinil on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:47:09 AM AEST
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