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Come Back To Me
Contributed by
pixie
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:46:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Come back to me, I miss you so much,
I miss the feel of your soft tender touch,
Upon my clear, transparent skin,
As you drag me across your arm and bleed from within.
You and I used to be so close,
Remember me the friend who gave you the most,
I comforted you in your times of need,
I gave you your wish when I made you bleed.
But now you ignore me and that hurts,
I long to hear your pleading words,
Long to have you hold me in your shaking hand,
And give to you everything you demand.
I have been made redundant am not needed anymore,
You have shut me out in the cold and closed the door,
I crave to see your cuts and witness their bleeding,
I have to feel alive I need to start feeding.
I cant forget all the times that we shared,
When it was me who shown you I cared,
All I can think about is your sweet tasting blood,
Let me back into your life I can make you feel good.
All you have to do is find a piece of glass,
Let me console you just let me slash,
Your skin is too perfect for my liking,
I need you back with me put an end to my pining.
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pixie
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2004-06-04 11:46:17]
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by MDodgen on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:00:54 PM AEST
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| good job walking on the dark side. i loved the imagery about the slashing. very good write. oh, and thanks again for your comments on my poems. |
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by Ina on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:20:53 PM AEST
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Pixie, I am usually turned off my skin-slashing poems because they seem cliche, but this one held my attention from the first stanza and that last sentence ("Upon my clear, transparent skin,
As you drag me across your arm and bleed from within.") to the end. Very smoothly written, very gentle.
Awsome job!
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:37:55 PM AEST
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| ! wow ! |
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Re: Come Back To Me
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:36:13 AM AEST
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Great write. It expresses true feeling to what I Have in my life right now. Nice write.
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