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Sugar
Contributed by
reilt
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:32:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Sugar Sweet tongue Messed up suck up Like your honey darling sister. Screw up chewed up Spat out To stick to the sole Of any passer-by Hey sweet thing My sugar-coated one My precious doormat I'll think of you Sometime - Never.
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reilt
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2004-06-04 13:32:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sugar
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ina on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 04:17:53 PM AEST (User
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Christ. I dont know why but this poem kicks big smooth as(s) I read it I realized it's fast, it's like a good metal song. And it's dir- tay
I was thrown off by the ending though. The second time i read it, i decided I do like it.
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