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What do you think
Contributed by
rachel
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:12:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What do you think of me now
Sitting here all alone
A shimmering star
But I've been over thrown
Now it's just me
Over here by myself
A whisper in the night
Aided merely by stealth
Who hears that whisper
And the secrets it holds
No one knows I'm here
Just a shiver in the cold
So now what do you think
Now that the shiver is gone
Reduced to nothing
Just a glich in a song
Copyright ©
rachel
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2004-06-04 15:12:31]
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Re: What do you think
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:16:20 PM AEST
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| I like it, it really evokes your emotions. Very smooth, too. Good job. |
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