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What I hate about you
Contributed by
Colleen
on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:20:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why are you always pushing others around
Why do you only show up where trouble is found?
You think you are better than everyone
Your head's up over the sun
People will be proud of you sure,
But when you rub it in their faces, now that's just immature
Stop thinking you're better than the best
You're a failure in my eyes, just like the rest
Being confident is one thing
But don't act like you're the super king
I'll see you when you slip and fall
Watch you grow weaker from when you were tall
How does it feel to know someone thinks of you this way?
I hope it will completely ruin your day
Change your ways, because no one cares
Remove all of your arrogant layers
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-06-04 21:20:42]
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Re: What I hate about you
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:54:59 PM AEST
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| great writing style. i can relate to your topic very well. believe it or not everyone thinks they are better tahn someone else in at least one thing. i have not met a person who thinks otherwise. but some people think they are good in everything, but thats not so. an excellent write. |
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Re: What I hate about you
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by Chimo on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:07:35 PM AEST
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very good writing
people suck dont they? |
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Re: What I hate about you
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:30:03 PM AEST
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Good work.
we're all equal in the eyes of God.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: What I hate about you
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:30:06 AM AEST
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i loved it....it was great keep it coming and keep it up....
read and comment my stuff if you want id like to hear what you think....
Dani |
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Re: What I hate about you
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:39:27 AM AEST
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i thought it was a great write....keep it up keep it coming...
read and comment my poetry id like to hear what you think....
much love,
Dani |
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