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Disenchanted
Contributed by
danimus
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Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:22:09 PM in AEST
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Find me lonely
Bound in depths of sorrow
Gripping me tightly
Will I be like this tomorrow?
I've found myself sad
No rest for these frowns
Frowns I wish I did not have
You can see I'm down
Bitter batter bleed
Alone and disenchanted
Flatten me out to breath
Wait for more flower to tamper with me
I can feel you kneading
I curl up and feel completely mistreated
Youre the baker of distress disease
I Burn and urge you to digest me
Occurring now and I'm hurt to set
On your kitchen table
Off and away from the rest
Of your ways to enable
So here I sit where I cried I mold
But you keep me here on display
Now I'm melancholy and its getting old
But I am the product of your ways
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Re: Disenchanted
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by blueheart on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:43:33 PM AEST
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Great words you used to depict your sadness, anger and frustration.
Dont we all feel like this on some days.
Great write filled with emotion. |
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Re: Disenchanted
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:50:15 PM AEST
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| an interesting metaphor. |
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