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Genesis Revisited
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:51:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There is ah pause
in the rift
and my broken wings flap
visions of pleasure
are thrilling me
forest of equilibrium comes alive,
pilgrims dance
under the moonlight.
The essence of love
enhancing a romantic scene
sensational
incredible
it just can not be described...
all the pleasure
on this slow ride.
A slight of my breath
a moan and a kiss
I tremble
in a moment of pure bliss
the eyes in my head go round and round,
Ahh
I'm adrift on a wave
passions crescendo
and i am swept away...
Love is all around.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-06-05 01:51:06]
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Re: Genesis Revisited
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:55:25 AM AEST
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wow, I could almost feel that all the love...that was great, I loved it....keep it up keep it coming...
read and comment my stuff if you want...
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Re: Genesis Revisited
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:04:16 AM AEST
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Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Genesis Revisited
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:15:36 AM AEST
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| beautiful... great! I really like this one |
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Re: Genesis Revisited
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:56:09 AM AEST
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Dreamy, Drifty, Clever and feeling......I enjoyed them all together.
Great Write
love
consue |
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Re: Genesis Revisited
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by Archie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 08:32:14 AM AEST
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| Not what I expected a surprisingly good poem. |
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