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Without You
Contributed by
fastpitchqt
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:59:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Love, Happiness, Acceptance
Heartbreak, Tears, Ugliness
How can I go from feeling so good to feeling unworthy of ones love?
How can one person make me feel so many things?
Then take them away with the same quickness they bestowed them upon me
Safe, Wanted, Special
Insecure, Betrayed, Alone
I went from feeling so safe in ones presence
To a feeling of abandonment and betrayal
Not just by you, but the world
Beautiful, Desired, Sexy
Fat, Unwanted, Unworthy
My self esteem skyrocketed just by the way you looked at me
Once you left I felt as though I would never be seen that way again
Insecure about appearance and myself I feel so alone
Dreams, Friends, Family, Pride
The love is still there
Its always there in different ways
Ill get over it and move on
Come out on top as a better person in the end.without you!
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fastpitchqt
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Re: Without You
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:11:38 AM AEST
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| another nice write. you have a great style of writing. I like your work alot!! |
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Re: Without You
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:56:46 AM AEST
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That is so great how you are gonna move on....and try and forget them....I loved the write....keep it up keep it coming...
read and comment my stuff Id like to see what you think....if you want
Dani |
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Re: Without You
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by wray on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:03:34 AM AEST
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| You go grl :) too bad there aren't more gals like you around to give other gals a kick in the butt. |
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Re: Without You
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by pixie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:26:53 AM AEST
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you have got great style. great poem, thanks for sharing
pixie xx |
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