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The Other
Contributed by
Coquillion
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:58:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I exist in two realities
Two separate personalities
One artistic, kind and gentle
The other dark and elemental -
it spits upon the human race -
a venomous brute that wears my face.
Yet tis a shadow mere misdirection
born for my inner selfs protection,
a savage wall behind which I hide
with all thats vulnerable, safe inside.
But how on earth could I foretell
that, that which had served me so well
would one day struggle to be free,
become self-aware and turn on me?
And now it fights to gain control
Of this body and its soul
It will eventually enslave me
And nothing on this earth can save me.
Copyright ©
Coquillion
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2004-06-05 06:58:37]
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Re: The Other
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by Archie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 08:48:10 AM AEST
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| A very interseting write and in many ways true. I hope you find a way to win your inner battle. |
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Re: The Other
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by pixie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:01:53 AM AEST
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I can relate to this in a big way I wrote a simular poem about my inner battle called Jeckyl and hyde, maybe you should read it, maybe you wont feel as tho you are alone with your struggles, you expressed it well, very dark, a trully great poem,
pixie xx |
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