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Shake Me
Contributed by
Theo_stretner
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:54:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Shake me awake,
Slap me in the face,
Tell me to stop,
When I feel your breath,
On my neck,
I cant be told,
I cant be shown,
I am blinded by my numbness,
You can see me caring,
All I see is hate,
Hate stirred up from the deepest point,
Directed toward the light,
I cant breath,
I cant see,
And it will not come to be.
Shake me awake,
It will be more than your life I take.
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Theo_stretner
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2004-06-05 09:54:55]
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Re: Shake Me
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:56:24 AM AEST
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| ouch, that was great. |
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Re: Shake Me
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by Archie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:05:06 AM AEST
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| Good write keep them coming |
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Re: Shake Me
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by lb12 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:13:46 PM AEST
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| all i can say is nice... |
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