|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
FORGET ABU GHRAIB
Contributed by
Elizabeth_Dandy
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:08:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
|
Forget that Abu Ghrabi Jail forget!
And the foul apple wardens sick and bad,
Look to heroic fighters lo, - the numberless!
Brave heroes that the Lord may keep and bless!
But Abu Ghrabi jail is sweet compared
What terror masters hold for us prepared.
Horrendous evil from the darkest pit,
That strains and does exceed by far our wit.
Bad apples mongst our own did make things bad,
But slowly with a knife saw off a head
Of innocent a helper - only hell
Can excercise these methods and excel
That takes in slow beheadings sheer delight
While victim Nicolas Berg screamed horrified,
We are in darkest ages now thrown back
Of torture, horse-drawn quartering and rack. .
Barbaric measures practiced to derail
Heroic toil, so chaos may prevail;
Their nature true is shown - of animals,-
A nature foul and beastly that appalls.
For terrors masters know of savagery,
We cannot even fathom its degree,
Outrage! and still bare-faced the thugs blaspheme!
Invoking Allah - God Almightys name!
Down with the ski masks! Abu Ghrabi is
A spa compared with the atrocities
Of terror masterminds' and flunkeys' horde,
That practice slow beheadings as a sport.
In Allahs name are done deeds of the pit,
May Allah punish them as He sees fit.
What crimes against the Spirit of Gods love!
Who heard of shocking blasphemies enough,
This is why our soldiers fight and spar-
Against the forces of deep hell they war,
Let not this earth be ruled by savagery,
Lord grant against such evil victory.!
by: Elizabeth Dandy
Copyright ©
Elizabeth_Dandy
... [
2004-06-05 10:08:13]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: FORGET ABU GHRAIB
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:12:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is a very true and deep poem. |
|
|
Re: FORGET ABU GHRAIB
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:22:25 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
FANTASTIC ed JUST FANTASTIC....THIS POEM WILL LAST THE AGES FOR SURE.
Because of the negativity of the press that's all we hear........but the Good Lord is watching and he is near. The time is very soon now when he will intervene.......they won't be able to fight against his forces.....then it will end.
Marvelous poem showing our history all over the world. Very sick, very sad, and like you said.........ruled by savagery!
Good work indeed!
love
Consue |
|
|
Re: FORGET ABU GHRAIB
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:51:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I think that you, like many people, are so far up the government's collective ass that u fail to see that the beheading of Michael Berg and the torture of the Iraqi POWs are one and the same... both HORRIBLY wrong. Like many Americans however u seem to think that other people are below you and that they have no feelings. There is a little thing called the Geneva Convention that says, basically, to treat prisoners well. Both the Islamic terrorists and American terrorists (yes... American TERRORISTS you read that correctly) failed in this and should BOTH be brought to justice. I am always continually amazed to see people somehow, through their own skewed logic, justify the mistreatment of Iraqi POWs, but scream bloody murder at the killing of Michael Berg. I shake my head in sadness... but I do commend you for writing a very good poem, very poignantly penned.
Bobo (Joel) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
