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Just Can't Take It
Contributed by
Saitou-sama
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:21:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Hiding in shadows
The world disappears
Nothing for comfort
Forget all my fears
Drowning in sorrow
Drunk on despair
Filter out feeling
With lies on the air
Tortured and nameless
Soul without worth
Tired and shameful
Regretting my birth
No more to wish for
Kindness too few
Nothing to live for
Wish I were gone too.
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Saitou-sama
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2004-06-05 13:21:45]
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Re: Just Can't Take It
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by pixie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:30:05 PM AEST
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very powerful words you express here, you have a real talent for expression, ... you are wrong there is so much left for you , sometimes you just have to look a little harder to see it,
takecare, great write
pixie xx |
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Re: Just Can't Take It
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by BlazeingHeart on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:30:05 PM AEST
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| i extremly like this poem, it describes what normal people go through and you are a very gifted writer. |
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Re: Just Can't Take It
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by Jolly on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:37:31 PM AEST
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| read Red, Red bubbles. That was me lying in the tub just a few weeks ago. But now the world has spun around and I thank God I didn't die...Please...Please remember things always change. Life is change and we never know what's around the corner...if we choose suicide we'll never find out. |
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