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Unknown feeling
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:43:17 PM in AEST
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We talked a little
Grew a lot
We shared a beer
And our hearts
It didn't feel right
Opening my heart to you
When i didn't even know you
I used to just go through life
Day in day out
Now i know
I'm just like everyone else
Except one thing
I did not call you dad
I don't think i can
I know i have my teamates to help me through
But isn't that supposed to be
Well to be you
There by my side
All in all
I LOVE YOU DAD
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Re: Unknown feeling
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by Elena on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:23:42 PM AEST
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It takes a lot to share that. Thank you and the best to you both.
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Re: Unknown feeling
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by Jolly on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:46:23 PM AEST
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| This touched my heart soooooooo much. I'm wiping away tears...(thanks like I need that) My grandaughters don't call my son Dad...I see all the things he's missed while they're growing up and my heart aches for them and for him...and for you. But it sounds like healing has begun and I pray for the day when you may call him dad...if he's worthy...Great poem. |
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Re: Unknown feeling
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:45:07 PM AEST
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O my god I loved that so much....and I'm sorry that you had gone so long without a dad...I have had my dad and he is just a phone call away...and I know I should call him, but liek I feel uncomfortable because I never really talked to him....but when I do I pour myself out...and its weird but I love him so much....I dont know I get confused I guess on the whoel things...But I really hope that you and your dad grow closer and closer because its so much a part of you....having dad's advice(as much as it hurts to listen to him just keep on talking) its worth it....you really learn a lot...I loved it great poem....
read and comment mine if you want....
much love,
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Re: Unknown feeling
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:58:48 AM AEST
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There goes your tender side again.
Very good write and it's so nice to know u have had this experience with your Dad. It's sad in a way but it's really good.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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