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My Dreams
Contributed by
BlazeingHeart
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:35:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Fluffy clouds, cotten candy, lolipops, and all things nice are the things of dreams, but not mine.
I dream of dark, ugly things, creaping, and crowling trying to get me.
I stand still wishing to be gone from this world.
But they all retreat to the shadows.
I start to cry, wanting to leave then wake up, safe in my hell, by home.
I go to the kitchen and look at the knives and pick a pretty one.
I start to cut my wrists and drop tot he floor, just as i close my eyes though.
I wake up again.
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2004-06-05 14:35:11]
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Re: My Dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 04:20:49 PM AEST
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This one...hmmm, what to say...I liked it, but what I don't like is seeing someone who hurts themselves, you don't deserve that pain. You are a wonderful poet, and I bet you are a great person...ever need to talk, just pm me, I'll be there...
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