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Open Curtians
Contributed by
dark_fighter_chick
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:21:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A little girl, prettiest around
Always chearful, never down
Loved by all, never alone
Perfect car, boyfriend, and home
A smile that can brighten the room
And laughter that shows no gloom
It's all told deep in her eyes
But you'll never hear her cryes
A sweet little girl is all they see,
But inside is something they'll never believe
Try as she might, but she can't win
This story has no end
But where it began is how things got wrong
This perfect childs mother is dead and gone
Due to an illness, slowly her mom dies
And the pain sinks deep in her eyes
A dead mom, and dad that can't care,
Falling for an enemy, and a boyfriend thats never there
Her boyfriends only after the fame and the cars
And he leaves her with bruses and scars
Her Perfect boyfriend playing the perfect game
Leaving perfect scars and perfect pain
Look deep enough, you'll see the lies
A cold, dark past hidden behind her eyes.
Perfect world, perfect girl, perfect life
Perfectly a broken blad on a perfect knife
A perfect smile to hide her fears
And a perfect laugh to hide her tears.
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2004-06-05 19:21:42]
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Re: Open Curtians
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:44:20 PM AEST
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| a very moving piece. an excellent write. |
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Re: Open Curtians
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by Seans_Girl on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:21:20 PM AEST
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| I liked that poem a lot. It was deep and I can relate to it in some ways. |
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