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Complicated Simple
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:32:32 PM in AEST
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You think it's so simple
then you turn around and it's not
u trip and fall
untying the knot
that you tied long ago
stepping in the cracks
breaking your back
things get twisted
turned upside down
and you think you've got it all figured out.
You try so hard to be something your not
falling into habits that arn't yours
trying to get back up is hard to do
but you know you've got to.
Lick the fire, taste so sweet
burning your soul, and making ends meet.
It gets so complicated
and you try and hold on
as time flies
u try and keep it close
but it passes you by and you let it go
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
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2004-06-05 19:32:32]
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Re: Complicated Simple
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:42:13 PM AEST
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wow, again another great write...you cant pretend to be someone else...and I've learned that...it makes you unhappy...thats what Ive learned about it...keep it up keep it coming...I loved it...I can totally see this becoming a song...
Dani |
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Re: Complicated Simple
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:42:02 PM AEST
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| very creative lyrics. a great job. |
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Re: Complicated Simple
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:44:20 AM AEST
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AWESOME! IT SAYS IT ALL!! NEAT ONE SIRENA!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Complicated Simple
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by Geykya on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 02:50:52 PM AEST
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| great write...thought provocing, which I love about yur poems, altho it didnt flow thru well the first time I tried to read it. Oh well maybe I've got no rythm. |
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