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Coming to an end!
Contributed by
bite_me
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:21:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My emotions are coming to an end,
They are over flowing with hurt,
Why do I feel this way, I look towards the heaven,
Why is it, everyone despises me, why dont I feel loved?
I hate this feeling inside me, I feel so empty so lost,
I just want to feel loved and wanted,
I slowly start to crush the tiny tablets,
And pour them into a cup,
This is the only thing that will help me out of this world,
The only thing that will stop this terrible pain, I feel in side,
The only thing I will ever be thankful for,
As I start to sip the drink Ive made I feel my body,
Gradually start growing sleepy, then the pain it starts,
I breathe deeper and deeper, hoping it will all end soon,
This is my only way out, I feel the gripping pain in side me,
And the terror is feels throughout me, I scream for help,
But I know Im gone no one will save me now, what have I done?
As it works its way down my body
Then bit by bit I feel myself slipping from this world,
And slowly the pains it leaves my body,
At last Im free, but should I rejoice or be sad for what Ive done.
Please God forgive me.
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2004-06-05 21:21:15]
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Re: Coming to an end!
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by TheVoice on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:41:56 PM AEST
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in almost every situation there is more than one way out. too often people get tunnel vision when if they refocused they would see other avenues. great job on the write.
the voice
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Re: Coming to an end!
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:43:54 PM AEST
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| You are so right. I could really see what you were explaining. I really liked it. Now see, with my luck, I wouldn't put QUITE enough pills in and just end up getting really sick. Lol. I hope you haven't treid to. I hope you feel better soon. But this poem was beautiful with many emotions. Kudos! |
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