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Disturbed
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:44:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The air is cold and my breath has stopped
I cannot move and I think Im trapped
My stomach is launching and twisting in circles
Its spiraling within its self...
I think Im falling
My skin feels wet and no air is here
My body is scathing and I cannot move
Numbness encircles me and I guess Im dying
Im spiraling within my self...
I think Im drowning
Blood is trickling from this new found wound
Silver eternity shines from my side
You cold eyes only followed by that smile
Im spiraling beneath your feet...
I think youve killed me
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InnerBeautyQueen
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2004-06-05 21:44:19]
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Re: Disturbed
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:08:49 PM AEST
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| a beautiful poem. that is some death they put you through. |
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Re: Disturbed
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by shelby on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:15:01 PM AEST
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woaaaawwwwwww intense write I hope noone kills you though that really wouldnt be cool!!
Michelle |
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Re: Disturbed
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:36:36 AM AEST
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wow, just wow, this is great, 5/5
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Re: Disturbed
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:37:11 PM AEST
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| thanks!!! |
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