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Enemy
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:13:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Chew me up to crush my bones
Drink my blood to slay my soul
Hold me hostage, futile desire
Set my wicked skin afire
Watch me with your evil eyes
Touch me so this part of me dies
Wake me in mornings red light
Lay me down, steal me tonight
Beat me till Im limp and desperate
Slaughter me to keep your secret
Mock my sobs, mourning lost worth
Inter my reality, swallowed by Earth
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-05 22:13:38]
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Re: Enemy
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by shelby on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:16:49 PM AEST
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raw and powerful each word cut right through a great job
Michelle |
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Re: Enemy
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:17:01 PM AEST
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| this is so interesting and creative its excellent |
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Re: Enemy
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:34:25 AM AEST
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very powerful, a great write.......
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