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Promise
Contributed by
rhei76
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:27:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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If ever did I lie so true
I swear it was to you
I tell you I'm so happy we are thru
for no longer will those days shine blue
after all
Heartache, lie ,deception, and guilt
a wicked soul on burnt city we built
loss of love, together we hate
bless the lord above for we found our fate
ash, smoldering, wet dirt that taints
enbedded, rubbed in spores it cakes
my, my our colors tell me we are fake
if one, by all, another lover that takes
The punches dealt
consumed acid, ecstacy, herion, & mushroom T
laced by reality and the end of you
I swear a lie so true
By Lilithe Black
Copyright ©
rhei76
... [
2004-06-06 09:27:33]
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Re: Promise
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:44:08 AM AEST
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wow, such a powerful array of words, 5/5
keep em coming,
pixie xx
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