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Scars
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:34:16 AM in AEST
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Scars are tough sometimes mean
Despite their often times unseen
There's those that are obvious and those that are not
Some that often haunt us a lot
Something deep rooted within
Which makes us want to give up as opposed to win
But we can fight it all the way
So that these wretched scars don't have to stay
We can build ourselves up strong, so that even despite all the wrong
We will make everything that counts, to a decent amount
And we will carry on
Re: Scars (User Rating: 1)by pixie on Sunday, June 06 2004 @ 09:42:26 CDT(User Info | Send a Message | Journal) Great poem, very positive 5/5pixie xx
by AnGeL_M (AnGeL_At_YoUr_SiDe198221@yahoo.com) on Sunday, June 06 2004 @ 10:05:36 CDT(User Info | Send a Message) Great Write Very Enjoyable Read !!! Keep Em Coming :-)LoVe,Hugs & God BlessLoVe - AnGeL
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Re: Scars
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by Theo_stretner on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:48:54 AM AEST
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| Thats a good poem where was your motivation?? |
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Re: Scars
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:37:46 PM AEST
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Nice write very encouraging I thought.
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Re: Scars
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by drinkWATER on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:40:26 AM AEST
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rare to find a piece so positive on this dot com.refreshing
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Re: Scars
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:52:08 PM AEST
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| deep... I like your writing, you pour alot of emotions into your words. thats how I think it should be done. A+++ |
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Re: Scars
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by Dizza_13 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:41:00 PM AEST
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Great write. U were right, i can relate to this.
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