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You Paint My Insides
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:51:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Why cant you see,
The pain you inflict upon me,
Behind your eyes are hollow pools,
Laughter spills from your lips thats so cruel.
You beat me into a pleading submission,
When will you stop, what will make you listen?
That I am just a mortal being,
Who laughs and cries and can be hurt by feelings.
But you youre just a chemical imbalance,
Against you I possess no resistance,
Your soul is black and you lack a heart,
The only certain thing is that youll show up and play your part.
What made you choose me to latch onto?
How much pain are you willing to put me through,
You reach right into me and rattle my bones,
Make me feel like I am truly alone.
You paint my insides morbid and black,
Taking away what you can never give back,
Every time I think youve finally had enough,
You come back to make my life that little more rough.
I am to you just a work of art,
Seeing what my insides look like torn apart,
Strewn across your canvas of pain,
On my soul you are an un- shiftable stain.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-06 11:51:00]
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Re: You Paint My Insides
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by fallensilence on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 11:54:32 AM AEST
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| great poem. you did a really good job rhyming words. -david |
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Re: You Paint My Insides
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:56:52 PM AEST
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| Perfectly directed, Soulfully indiguisted as stunning as the emotion shown. Better daze will find you, I see you know where you want to go. God Bless You. |
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Re: You Paint My Insides
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by screwup on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:35:28 PM AEST
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| I am lost for words... that has to be one of the best poems I have ever read. I know EXACTLY what you are feeling, and you described it so well... probably the best way it can be described or can be written. |
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Re: You Paint My Insides
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by Princesaazul16 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 06:32:48 PM AEST
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Everytime I read one of your poems ~ it takes my breath away. And once again you did it. You have such a strong and vivid way to state your case so to speak. Keep up the good work! I loved it.
~Stace~ |
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