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7 Days
Contributed by
CypherX
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 12:10:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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On the first day. A velvet blanket covers the
mystical endless abyss that I call home.
Bearing a galaxy, the second day. A
cataclysmic blinding light shone it's rays
throughout.
Now conceiving a dawn, the third day. An
overwhelming appease was followed by
violent uproar of masses gathering
Having earth to stand upon, the fourth day.
Fierce earthquakes and tremendous rivers
of red magma flowed.
Breaking in the earth, the fifth day. Ice blue
water dropped from the new-born heavens
and fields of flora breezed the earth.
Fashioning perfection, the sixth day.. God
arose from the sunburst sky and placed his
model upon the landscape.
Concealing a forbidden secret, the seventh
day. The young stared at the void in curiosity
and denied their Creator's existence,
therefore destroying what had just been
birthed.
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CypherX
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2004-06-06 12:10:59]
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Re: 7 Days
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by pixie on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 12:12:06 PM AEST
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trully great write
pixie xx |
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Re: 7 Days
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by brigitte7735 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:22:26 PM AEST
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awesome, love interpretations of stuff like that
Vanessa |
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Re: 7 Days
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by sunnyrainbows on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:27:06 PM AEST
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ooh! i like it. i think i'm interpreting it correctly.
i like the description you used..."forbidden secret", "fashioning perfection"...and some of the colours: "red magma", "ice blue water".
and the 7th day....
about how people deny the existance of God...therefore destroying....something. that's how i interpreted it =P |
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