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Love is Blind
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:11:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Here I am sitting alone in this barren god-forsaken,
Place, devoid of life a landscape of everything deceased,
Then you lie by my body, holding my muddy hand,
Everything disappears around me, for my mind you have taken,
I shudder at your forbidden beauty; my heart rate is increased,
Then your lipstick is smeared, I enclosed my lips around yours
We danced around on the darkened grass, holding hands beneath the moon,
A grace fall waltz, so pure in every single way, so very pure,
I knew from that moment you were always going to be mine,
You were real, so real, so beautiful, even if doubt was starting to loom
Why would you love me, why would your care, my job? Sure!
It was like a fairy tale told at night by the campfire, another parable.
Love is blind and so are you, the present is evaporated,
As I embrace your body, our skin touches, our minds connected,
I forget my troubled youth, everything that destroyed my mind
With your body in my arms, Ive forgotten everything I hated,
Im so wide awake with you, my god, I feel so infected,
You are mine to keep forever, your presence now un-buried
Knowing now that you exist, lying here glowing by my side,
I feel this urge to tell the world, that you are my new sunshine,
I have to prove to the world you real, Ive already cried wolf before,
Everyone has to know my worship for you; I have nothing to hide,
Cover your face up with a veil; walk with me side by side, your mine,
Your real, your real, your real, and I made you so beautiful
****
Here we are tonight, getting ready for the great town gala ball,
I made your dress myself, sewn with all my love and kisses for you.
This perfume is so sweet smelling to shroud the world so potent.
As we walk, your arm over my shoulder over to the town hall,
I feel your excited, but so very cold, I have to give my coat to you.
Here we are, as we enter the room, this is the moment, the moment of truth
A scream, a shout, glasses and plates breaking, suddenly everyone stops,
No noise nothing, just staring, staring because youre so very beautiful,
I take your hand proudly and walk down the aisle. But something so strange
Feels like Im holding just an arm. I turn round, you fall, your eye pops,
Shock, horror, dismay, as your head rolls across the floor, its so hurtful,
I look at your hand, dismembered from your fallen decaying body
It was supposed to be so simple
I was just a mere undertaker
And you were a mere corpse
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-06-06 14:11:24]
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Re: Love is Blind
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:49:33 PM AEST
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My God man...this is chiiling to the max. Dark and horrible in its nature but a work of imaginary genius.
Very well done
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Re: Love is Blind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:02:09 PM AEST
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Holy mother of God, Alec. This is macabre. I have to say you held me till the end. I just cannot imagine where you held this in your mind. It is soooo strange.
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Re: Love is Blind
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by MDodgen on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:30:14 AM AEST
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| beautful job again. i love how you take us to our fantasy, all flowers and hearts, then snap us back to reality, pain and dark. good job. |
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Re: Love is Blind
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by Medieval_Enigma on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:36:36 AM AEST
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| Wow!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this poem very much, it's one of my favorites.. |
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Re: Love is Blind
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by arden on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:33:49 PM AEST
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*shuts mouth*
*shuts it again*
Wow.... this was...wow.. lol
i am speechless. i LOVED this write. the twist was bloody awesome. everything about this is just amazing. i was memorized from the start until the very end. just wow.
deserves more then just 5 stars.
loved it.
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Re: Love is Blind
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:57:50 PM AEST
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Alec, I was mesmerized by your write, and the end just came too soon......and with it the goosebumps......Fantastic imagination, who would have ever thought?
BRAVO for you Alec.......it was so imaginatively horrible.......I usually don't like dark poetry.......but this one was unique.
Love it
consue
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Re: Love is Blind
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:14:31 PM AEST
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| OMG, the twist at the end shocked me right out of my skin. Horrible and dark to the extreme and yet it is a true work of art. |
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