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The Over Look Of Green
Contributed by
SheDevil13317
on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 06:47:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I laid my head, upon the sill, the over look, of the green. The rain has fallen, dew has been collected, upon my dry heart, lost of love, departed wishes.
My eyes of nothing, remember your touch, the care you put, in one to many things. Every moment, every blink, made me think, of the love we shared.
The tender embrace, that I held on, slipped away, into space. But the many scars, that you have left, made me cry, made me scream, made me disappear into shadows from down under.
My feelins maybe misplaced, but my thoughts will always change, the feeling that I felt for you, left along with those dull hazel eyes.
I laid my head, upon the sill, the over look of green. Reminded me how empty I felt, with out you right by myside.
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2004-06-06 18:47:21]
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Re: The Over Look Of Green
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by venkat on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:23:52 AM AEST
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Your feelings and thoughts are well expressed. No problem..
you are able to write what you felt at heart..
good.. keep writing on. venkat |
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Re: The Over Look Of Green
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by LiLTor878 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:14:31 AM AEST
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| Wow!!! It blew me away! You have a way with words in all your poems and this one is, is too good for words... |
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Re: The Over Look Of Green
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 06:41:55 PM AEST
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| Very nice. I especially like the title. |
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