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Between tragic flaw and redeeming grace
Contributed by
Elena
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:31:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Between tragic flaw and redeeming grace
I often pause to hide my face.
A mortal whisper, frail am I
An angels understudy, the question why?.
So near to perfect, so far away.
So like an illusion, dusk at the break of day.
Both he and she, both mist and might
A God impersonation, a fallen light.
A word of wisdom, a fools address
The Golden East, the Omniverous West
A dawning smile on sorrows brow.
The answer to your question now?
I choose grace.
Copyright ©
Elena
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2004-06-07 05:31:42]
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Re: Between tragic flaw and redeeming grace
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by Stitch on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:09:25 AM AEST
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Amen. I like this. I understand the flaws of attempting perfection. It rightly belongs only to God. His grace is our domain. Amen.
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Re: Between tragic flaw and redeeming grace
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:54:14 AM AEST
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Wounderful, truly delightful read. I give it 5/5 for sure. I loved the free flow of words runing into eachother. Left me in delighful mood.
Your fellow poet
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Re: Between tragic flaw and redeeming grace
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by Lionel on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 05:19:19 PM AEST
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WOW...You're on subject now. WOW... Classic. Inspired...up there with the masters.
God bless you. |
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