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Beaten & Broken
Contributed by
SheDevil13317
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:29:58 AM in AEST
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I no longer care of the pain they inflict
I no longer punch, scream, or kick
Going along with what they say
Beaten and broken is how I lay..
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SheDevil13317
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2004-06-07 09:29:58]
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Re: Beaten & Broken
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:47:24 AM AEST
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Short indeed but doesn't take away from the poem, very dramatic. Good write.
Your Fellow Poet
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Re: Beaten & Broken
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by Black13 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 02:18:28 PM AEST
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Seemed pretty blunt to me.
Nice write.
I agree with the previous statement. |
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Re: Beaten & Broken
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:35:06 PM AEST
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Intense and dramatic, despite the shortness. Ouch! You are filled with pain. Don't lose hope, though it many times feels like the only way out! Odd how that works. Painfully deep.
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Re: Beaten & Broken
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by LiLTor878 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:09:55 AM AEST
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| Tells so much in four short, meaningful lines... |
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