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Painted Lies
Contributed by
parkman
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Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:55:51 PM in AEST
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Slap me, across my cheek
Turn me, into a lamb so meek
Clip me, dont let me fly
Cage me, I will surely die
Silence me, cut out my tongue
Burn me, its how you have fun
Bruise me, another colour
Cut me, my pain you devour
Blind me, gouge out my eyes
Love me, its painted lies
Freedom, keep me from it
Hide me, in your bottomless pit
Deafen me, plug my ears
You've done it, for all these years
Twisted tales, from a heart that flirts
If this is love, then love hurts
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-06-07 12:55:51]
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Re: Painted Lies
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by pixie on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:02:31 PM AEST
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very deep and dark, well written
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Re: Painted Lies
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:05:34 PM AEST
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Whoa, spare me that love! Talk about twisted, for sure. Hope this is not truly your love life.
Rita |
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Re: Painted Lies
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 02:24:08 PM AEST
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Your pain flowed beautifully out of your words. The rhythym and style was very nice, but the message, was hurting and saddening. You did well in writing about your agony. I liked the last stanza the best. Especially the last line. But, I don't think it's love.
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Re: Painted Lies
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 03:07:51 PM AEST
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WoW, oOoOOOooo I love this so much...the words flowed great and so beautifully...I knwo love hurts...but if it was true love it will get better...keep it up and keep it coming..I'd love to read some more
read and comment mine I'd liek to see what you think...If you want
much love,
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Re: Painted Lies
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 03:51:24 PM AEST
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| Awesome write, Parkman! Wow! I really like this one.... I'm looking forward to reading more... |
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Re: Painted Lies
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:08:09 PM AEST
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oww crazy I hope this is just how love feels (as often it does) and not what 'love' is to you. Good poem in any case.
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