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Poisonous Turmoil
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:17:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Midnight in Deaths rock garden
Memories flow through throbbing veins
Relentlessly tortured, outlook hardened
Begging you to stop, pleading to be saved
Shackled in cold, dark for an age
Shivering in terror at your approach
Beaten to hopelessness with your rage
Stripped naked with your vicious reproach
Pale and withered I swear to end this
One last battle to declare the victor
Empty grave filled by reward of Deaths kiss
Conqueror accepts the right to inter
Now we stand eye to eye
Blades launch in Moons sharp light
Bleeding, dying, gasping you lie
Ive slain myself to finish this fight
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-07 19:17:31]
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Re: Poisonous Turmoil
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:31:50 PM AEST
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| Very touching. You express what you're thinking and how you're feeling incredibly well. You have a natural talent for using words to your advantage. |
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