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Also I.
Contributed by
SilentPwn
on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:44:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Killing me. Feeling nothing. Happily enjoying. Numbing pain. Hurtful words. Spoken softly. Burn me. Hurt you. Die now. Must erase. Time flies. Daily thinking. Wishful bleeding. Hurt more. Pain dies. Also I. Must erase. Time together. Kill you. Save energy. Use blood. Tears flood. Cries die. Also I. Was forever. Now never. Forget me. Remember pain. Kill you. Bleed again. You leave. Wishes die. Also I. I cry. Suddenly free. Me wishing. You bleed. Hurting you. Killing innocence. You die. Also I.
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Re: Also I.
(User Rating: 1 ) by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:49:02 PM AEST (User
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actually it does make sense to me, and its great. its so full of feeling and its juss well..great lol, awesome job! |
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Re: Also I.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:04:10 PM AEST (User
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yea...I also think it makes some what sense...I mean it may be your situation, I'm not aware of it...but it was a good poem. I can tell you put a lot of feeling into it, thats what makes it so great...I loved it...very powerful
great write
read and comment mine...Id love to hear what you think...if you want
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Re: Also I.
(User Rating: 1 ) by buchi on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:37:45 AM AEST (User
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new dimensions to a never ending concept...
does keep you moving with anticipation |
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