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Touch my hand
Contributed by
ReachingZero
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:20:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Apparently, I'm not good enough for you
Apparently, I'm not close enough to you
This just doesn't feel right.
There should be something more here.
I search, and strive for the goal.
Don't you understand?
You place me in a separate class
The juxtaposition startles us both.
What happens, when we're forced to show
what happens when emotions rise.
I'm ready, are you?
There should be something more here.
Somewhere, the same thing is happening
Except it follows the proper discourse
The parallel-you and parallel-me have the simple difference
The goal has been obtained in that plane of existance.
There should be something more here.
Everyone can see it, even ourselves.
The risk is part of the challenge
No one escapes that flaw.
Thus, everything stops, all of the repetition ends
The cycle must be broken.
Copyright ©
ReachingZero
... [
2004-06-08 01:20:26]
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Re: Touch my hand
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:35:48 AM AEST
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Very interesting and thought prvoking write.
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emy |
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Re: Touch my hand
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:36:45 AM AEST
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Very interesting and thought prvoking write.
Smiles, peace,
emy |
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Re: Touch my hand
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 02:19:52 AM AEST
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RZ! I have always and will always be a fan and this one was awesome! It made so much sense, it was kind of freaky. Yeah well this is an excellent poem, great write. keep them coming.
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