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destruction of the soul
Contributed by
korax
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 04:33:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I ask my alter ego who is in control
A paranoid reality or a tortured lying soul?
The truth it clouds my mind so much
I do not know the real me
My soul poisons my thoughts each day
Erodes my sanity
Am I a product of a nineties youth?
Let down by haunted dreams
A failure to realise my potential
Thats how it seems to me
A man who frees trapped animals
Yet forgets to shut the gate
A man who se childhood dreams have died
Ambition turns to hate
I'm a faded jewel in an unworn crown
With thorns around my head
My smile still plays, but oh so false
My soul is almost dead
So one more go thats all I have
The strongest has turned weak
I part with a bow and a sly old smirk
Depart with a poisoned kiss upon thy cheek
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Re: destruction of the soul
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 04:45:30 AM AEST
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wow, this had a lot of powrful like I dont know charisma...it was a emotional, dark side of something so pwerful...ther you go...lol I loved it it was a great write...thats why I gave it a 5!!!!! it was great keep i up keep it coming
read and comment mine if you want...I'd love to hear what you think...
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Re: destruction of the soul
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 04:56:32 AM AEST
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Very good write.
it''s deep, strong, moving and cute.
smile, wink, peace,
emy |
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Re: destruction of the soul
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:02:12 AM AEST
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Wow, great work, keep em coming and I will keep reading and commenting
pixie xx |
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Re: destruction of the soul
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:08:52 AM AEST
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I stand corrected I did read this one.
Ssorry That was one of my insomniac spells that hit me without warning at will.
So I go to the next one.
huggs,
emy |
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