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Summer Cold
Contributed by
merry
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 04:09:37 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Eyes burn my head inside out
Liked celluloid sizzling behind my eyelids
Stuffy head and tissues all about
First Im hot and then Im cold
I hurt from my nose down to my toes
Barking cough and runny nose
Strong hot tea and toast with jam
A jar if Vicks held in my hand
Helps me breathe at least a little
Outside my window birds chirp and sing
Come on out sit on the swing
But Im too tired for sunny skies
Pretty flowers and butterflies
This summer cold has worn me out
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merry
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2004-06-08 16:09:37]
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Re: Summer Cold
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 04:51:55 PM AEST
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I want to say I know how you feel...I hat summer colds....I hate not being able to do things I really want because nature takes it course...lol it was kind of a funny poem tho bits and pieces but yeah...great write however..I enjoyed reading it lol...
read and comment my stuff if you want, I'd like to hear what you think
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Re: Summer Cold
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 08:37:09 AM AEST
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Cute. I hate that, too.
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Re: Summer Cold
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:18:49 PM AEST
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awww (((gaille)))) even in misery you write so damn well. Get some Puffs for that red nose ;0P
Roses for my daisy
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Re: Summer Cold
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:29:24 PM AEST
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the jar of vicks just made this so vivid lol, i do hope your better now sweetie, great write, a true poetess who cannot for love, money or stuffy nose put down her pen:) hugs n' love nessa
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