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Nightfall
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:34:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Ive come to sit by your lonely side
To gaze into the midnights sky
And listen to the moonlight symphony
Hold our breath and thin into melody
We can wonder on forever
Once we know the truth
The lies see through
Keep on holding to believing
And seeing through everything
We can hide under the distant pleasure
Seeking for what our lives mean
Always pretending broken things are brighter
Lift up closer to all our dreams
And further from the seems
We can wonder on forever
Once we know the truth
The lies see through
Keep on holding to believing
And seeing through everything
Ill stay this way
Of knowing nothing
Then Ill never fall
Or fly away
But stay where the world is placed
Under our own shade of nightfall
We can wonder on forever
Once we know the truth
The lies see through
Keep on holding to believing
And seeing through everything
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-06-08 17:34:34]
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Re: Nightfall
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:36:38 PM AEST
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| i like this. good verbal imagery and emotion |
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Re: Nightfall
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:43:51 PM AEST
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| wow i liked it, great imagery and everything was well exspressed, good job! |
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Re: Nightfall
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:04:48 PM AEST
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wow I agree with the other 2 comments...it was very powerful I loved it...keep it up and keep it coming please I enjoyed it....honestly you express our feelings well
please read and comment my stuff...Id love to hear what you think if you want...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Nightfall
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:05:19 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Two thumbs up!! |
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