|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
you are my death
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:15:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
hallow, empty, numb. you left me this way. you left me.... you decieve with ease. friendly pain, that you provide me. resounding words, muffled by your lies. your image, precious as silk. smooth skin, flowing hair, stunning.... but now, I dont want to see you. no matter how pleasing to the eye. you harbor my anger, and cut away its anchor. you set it free, finally.... I see you as your worst. you lie and lie I cried I cried but im done with you now. you no longer own claim to my heart. I know you now... I see you... evil temptress.... why must you wear your beautiful mask? and say such precious things? your robes haves been cast away, and I see your true form. you only exist to destroy, to cause havoc. but you no longer have any power over me. I slip upon your blades edge.... you dug deep and stabbed at my soul... but you hit my heart... and I slowly bled and bled over time you and your jagged edge, you are my death....
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
... [
2004-06-08 23:15:44] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: you are my death
(User Rating: 1 ) by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:25:43 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I'm glad you are deciding what you are deciding..that was a great write...I loved it...I hope that you continue writing...dont ever quit that...lol ur gonna be famous one day...lol well Im telling the truth all your work are masterpieces...I loved it...great work....
much love,
Dani |
|
|
Re: you are my death
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:20:12 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
so full of pain but nicely written
michelle |
|
|
|