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Behind Blue Eyes pt.2
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:41:36 AM in AEST
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"Behind Blue Eyes pt.2"
I dont push you away
If anything I want you near
You tell me I have nothingnothing at all to fear
What about losing you?
Youre the boy behind blue eyes
I wanna unmask the unveiling
I want to hear you say it
Not see it
I love you
It screams bloody murder
As if your pulling a knife out of your heart
Do you really think I hurt you?
Is this really real?
I hope it is because
I dont wanna explain, that I feel
Come here
It hurts, inside of me
Inside of me
I want you to know it
Step off your broken stool
Dont hide your feelings inside of you
I dont want to run, but stand still
This moment is it for real?
Dont tell me you dont care
I lied
Come here
Listen
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Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 04:24:16 AM AEST
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I have seen the first part also... powerful and .emotional write..Good Keep it up.
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Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2
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by Soulless on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:34:29 PM AEST
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I read the first part but didnt bother commenting because I knew I would have to finish it. I enjoyed this poem a lot your feelings were expressed very well, everything fitted pretty nicely too.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2
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by rugby_player on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 08:51:03 PM AEST
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| Good job girl. Hmmmm it seems to me i have told you are are good at this but do you ever listen to me...i might as well give up..oh well anywho great job |
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Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:14:15 PM AEST
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| very nice, came together well, and I agree with rugby, you are a great poet! If you dont see it, we do. A++++ |
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Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:40:48 PM AEST
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| Good |
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