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The Sixth Sense
Contributed by
GeorgeJamesDelgado
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:02:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Don't know where it came from.
Some say from Upstairs.
But it's bothering me.
Can almost hear you thinking,
and my eyes keep blinking,
when you vibrate feelings to me.
I can feel your emotions.
They sound like oceans in my mind!
Please don't lie!
I don't know why, but I can sense
when you do.
Some of your thoughts are sweet
and calm.
There is love there.
Others are disturbing.
Very hard in confirming your intentions.
They worry me!
Don't worry about your past.
It's a distant dot.
Doesn't matter; can't change my mind
about you.
It's your decision!
With a little vision you can stay with me.
Let me help you heal!
Copyright ©
GeorgeJamesDelgado
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2004-06-09 10:02:56]
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Re: The Sixth Sense
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:14:42 AM AEST
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Wow! you've read my mind!!! I wrote a poem titled "sixth sense" a short time ago. So your 6th sense is a lil slow, but hey, you caught it. lol
Nice write on the portayal of the mind and it's thoughts concerning the 6th sense.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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