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The endless night
Contributed by
Mihiri
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:41:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I wish this night would end, my friend,
I wish this night would end,
You are my closest comrade,
But, are you still my friend?
The days will fly no matter what,
So, Ill treasure what Ive got,
A silhouette of a memory,
Is that whats left, or not?
Tell me my friend, should I just go?
Is this friendship no more?
Should we roam around this endless night,
Not knowing what we should know?
Copyright ©
Mihiri
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2004-06-09 10:41:08]
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Re: The endless night
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by KSUHO11 on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:30:40 AM AEST
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| It sounds very sad, and makes me feel like you lost a friend that you could do nothing to stop from losing, I like the line "A silhouette of a memory," good poem. |
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