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Three Blessings
Contributed by
taz
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 10:58:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As thee majestic mountain do you win
Alll my being as abstract as a techincally
Drawn rose are those feelings
The simple touch of your hand brings forth
Worth all sustained before to now
Be so honored to have you for a momoent in
My life warm as the sun is this
Heart with the hope thus will last for
All eternity,Three just three things awe me
And these will always be lights dancin
Upon a velvet sky above Mckinely
Thee love of a child and three will most deffinetly
Be for eternity,Which is the love you arouse
In me for these three each I am thankfull
For none no more so than ,those eyes or
Three little words from your
Touch I feel and you express so well.
Ilove you.
Copyright ©
taz
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2004-06-09 10:58:53]
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Re: Three Blessings
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:15:32 AM AEST
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This is a lovely dedication, trully beautiful
pixie xx |
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Re: Three Blessings
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:27:23 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed your expressions of love - I think an edit for spelling would help this flow - nice job |
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