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Locked away
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:06:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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wrenching free
i grasp for hope
locked away
blood on hands
i slice my throat
the skin slides away
i squeeze your hand
stab in the knife
rip out my soul
i'll love you more
he doesn't see
understand my says
caught in the net
my mind broken
i pick up the pieces
where will you go?
who will you touch?
sanity collapse
your tears in my pillow
warmth in the frigid wind
wrapped in the blanket
that once touched your skin
more icy tears
and blood blends in
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2004-06-09 11:06:45]
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Re: Locked away
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:17:46 AM AEST
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you are so good at dark poetry, please dont ever stop writing, as I really do enjoy reading so much
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Re: Locked away
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:02:34 PM AEST
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Re: Locked away
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:15:56 PM AEST
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this was awesome the sort of curt clipped lines really added a lot to the poem. I loved the line of you grasping for hope.
Bobo (Joel) |
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