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Save You
Contributed by
ksuho11
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:38:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Save You
I save you every night
Of course not when it counted
I see it all again, do something different
Dozens of times, lots of different ways
Faster, more clever maybe
The days dont seem to matter anymore
Youve been gone for so long
I wish I could have done better
Done better for you, so you might still be here
Never have failed you, broke the promise
So you wouldnt have had to leave
Every night I save you
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2004-06-09 11:38:16]
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Re: Save You
(User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:16:13 PM AEST
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