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Hear My Cry
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:06:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the middle of the night,
Hold my close and oh so tight,
Let us float up into the sky,
When were alone hear my cry.
My heart belongs with you,
As you know all it has been through,
I know youll bathe it in pure love,
You make me fly way up above
Above the clouds and trees,
To high for any one to see,
Then and only then,
Can I cry my happy tears again.
This is not a cry of a broken heart,
But of two souls that will never be apart,
Bound together, bound as one,
A wanting I never want to overcome.
Kiss my sweet, wet tears,
That fall and wash away my fears,
My cry is a sound for you only,
Take me in your arms and love me wholly.
Hear my beautiful , soft call,
Look into my eyes and fall,
Fall through the starry night sky,
As you descend please hear my cry.
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pixie
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2004-06-09 12:06:28]
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Re: Hear My Cry
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:13:19 PM AEST
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Very emotional write.good job,
By the way thanks for all your comments on my poems, |
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Re: Hear My Cry
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by frejya on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:26:30 PM AEST
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nice poem though feels good, thxs 4 the comments on my poems , im not sure if i shud say this but I GUESS a lil bit more on rythm will make it rock!
take care |
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Re: Hear My Cry
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by Seans_Girl on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:17:13 PM AEST
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| Nice written poem. It really shows a lot of emotion. Good Job |
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Re: Hear My Cry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:58:59 PM AEST
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I feel the emotion as you lift us up in this lovely write.
Great job! |
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Re: Hear My Cry
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by willow_tara72002 on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:36:24 PM AEST
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im not good at posting comments cause i usually end up saying the same things,.. but i usually post comments to poems i can relate to the most,. but another great poem
-Amber |
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