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i didnt think
Contributed by
lindsaylootoo
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:03:40 PM in AEST
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I didnt think i could see
i didnt think i could smile
i didnt think i could hear
coz you broke mom's heart
you couldnt see me grow up
you couldnt see me smile
you couldnt hear me cry when i got my heart broken
coz you ran from me and mom
me and mom laugh without you
we cry coz of you
we fought coz of you
so why werent you therefor us when i grew up so dont call and leave me alone like you did when i was 3 years old
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2004-06-09 13:03:40]
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Re: i didnt think
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:40:18 PM AEST
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Alot of raw emotions here, but you expressed them well and wrote a powerful and great poem
takecare
Pixie xx |
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