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Everyone Has A Story..
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:13:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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everyone has thier story hidden deep inside if u take the time to know a stranger you'd discover things they hide
every person has a talent some dont let it show eachone u just have to dig deep inside to kno
every person has thier faults some visible to the eye some invisible but still lie down deep inside
for example take that popular girl that every girl wants to be outside she seems happy and carefree but deep down inside shes created her own rivalry
take that boy that sits alone and always reads his books deep down inside he's such a great guy so sweet and well mannered
now take the class nerd get to know them are they really that bad?
take that gorgeous guy the one every girl wished they had, talk to him and you might as well be talkin to a wall hes concited and mean the looks dont mean nothing at all
take that quite girl that hangs out wit ur crowd but rarely talks get to know her, take her for a walk so many ideas built up inside all they need is a chance becuase thier so shy
now take the class jock the one who seems hes got everything the girls, the looks but you would find out more if u would take a 2nd look
take that person you've misjudged get to know them with friendliness and some love
take that person by the hand let them kno u understand
take a kid any kid Stephen, Caitlin, Cory becuase deep down inside everyone has a *STORY*
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xxbreathlessx
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2004-06-09 15:13:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Everyone Has A Story..
(User Rating: 1 ) by HOPE4ME2 on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:41:58 PM AEST (User
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You did such a wonderful job getting this truth across, loved the flow and the use of your words.
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Re: Everyone Has A Story..
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:12:33 PM AEST (User
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So wise and right you are!
I loved your poem and the only minor changes that would make it better would be with your spelling. If you fixed that you would have an incredible poem.
Everyone does have a story and often we forget this and you have given me food for thought. I want to remember to take the time to get to know people. Your poem has reminded me.
Well done.
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